Hi, and welcome to my blog-turned-place where I post my writing. This is my outlet to put them up, which was radically different from the blog that this started out as. I hope you'll have a good time reading my blog/place where I post some poetry and some short stories. I try to cover a variety of topics in these works of mine, so I hope any readers will enjoy it. I'm not an English major by any stretch, but I enjoy writing. Critique would be nice for my writing, cause lord knows I could work on it. Enjoy!

Wednesday, July 25, 2012

That Lonely Feeling (co-written with a friend)

Sometimes I start to panic about the promises I’ve made
And I try to do the best I can
To make up for my mistakes.
Mistakes of the long forgotten past.

And when I ask her,
I ask her, I ask her about those moments
When I lied or cheated,
How she felt.
When I was scared away. When I was wandering those lonely roads.

Thinking I was alone. In that lonely stretch of earth.
Do you hear my late night cries? Do you know that I miss you?
I wonder if you care for me anymore.

Time has a way of erasing love from each other.

1 comment:

Erin said...

I seriously like the way this poem flows--especially considering that it was written with someone else. It shows you two work well together!